https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vb4z1f4fJkQ&feature=youtu.be
I used the feedback I got from the last pitch we did and used that at the beginning of this video. If I state facts, that I might catch someones attention and make them realize that something does have to be done. I thought all the feedback that I got previously was great and it helped me with this elevator pitch!
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Nicole, Great job on your elevator pitch revision. I thought your opening had more attention grabbing facts and your message was much more concise. I know it’s never easy to video yourself but I think the lighting in your second video is much better than the first elevator pitch. Good work taking feedback from the first assignment to make your second assignment great.
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ReplyDeleteI think you did a great idea on your blog post! Keep up the great work. I thought your new version of your pitch was much better than last time and you made great progress. Your feedback really made a great difference.
Nicole! Your elevator pitch is very good. You have made a big improvement in comparison with your first elevator pitch. I like the tone of your voice and the clear and precise way you are expressing your ideas. You are doing a great job! Keep going!
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